Once I got to the earth-boards I immediately grabbed on to the nearest and coolest one. Then the adult who was in charge of it said “hop on your earth-boards get set go!’’ It was nerve-racking when he said go because it looked painful, what if I fell off. I thought I would, and I did, it hurt. I had lots of grass stains on my jeans.
Soon enough they were ready to go “are you ready’’ said the adult ‘’yes’’ we all said except me. But just then Cameron pushed me straight down the rocks. I felt like my heart was beating 100 kilometers an hour! I felt like a yellow and black cheater in a huge paddock. After a few more runs I felt good. Then we went to the next thing. I wondered what it was.
Then I felt a bit better when we got to the bmx bikes. Then I said hello to the adult, he came and gave me a race across the whole field, it was really tough. But he completely won by miles because he has more muscles than me.
Then we went to damper. My dad was there and he was dirty and had dough all over his clothes. First we got water and flour then we mixed it all up until it was all gooey, sticky and squishy. After that we put the dough on a stick and put it in the hot scorching fire. But it slipped in the fire then we had to get another one. I had to wait a long time for it to get crunchy and crispy. Then it suddenly caught on fire, I panicked and it got burned. I ate some and it was really yummy, it was the yummiest thing that I had ever tasted.
The next thing I did was go to the parachute. I was number 3 and when my number was called I had to run as fast as I possibly could around the parachute once. But I slipped around the corner because I had socks on then you had to get the ball. The parachute was the bright colours of the rainbow.
Soon we went to a game when you pass platforms to each other as fast as we could then you step on it. There was 7 things that were the platforms. In the end I wondered if it was fast or slow.
By the time I was back I was really tired. I fell asleep before it was dark and dad put water on me to wake me up. The water was out of my drink bottle.
JW
5 comments:
WOW! Jack w,you have worked real hard on this really fantastic recount. You have put lots of fantastic adjectives and some good describing words. Keep the great effort up.
By P.S.
nice work I really enjoied it.I liked all of your detail.
jack,i like how you put this in how it happened for real.keep it up
wow that must of taken days to work on. i think you could put more nouns in it but nice work!
jw
wow, i love how you have put a lot of effort into your camp recount, great job!
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